Hey Josh -- I think you may be pushing my other piece too. Can I ask that you not break up my paragraphs? I like to keep the flow and the integrity of the piece in tact. If there are major issues or minor issues...like grammar or something not making sense and needs clarity, please feel free to leave me a note and I'll make revisions, but please, can I ask that my pieces not be subjected to this crazy Medium style thing where writers only write in single sentence paragraphs? I know why it's done, but I'd prefer not to do it. I'd like to keep my pieces in their true form. Thanks.